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Sketchbook by ~abbebe:iconabbebe:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Fixed


Those pages full of pencilled left in dirt.
Hours chained by sick love that makes me hurt.
It beacons to me whenever I look.
And I obey; reeled in by its hook.

Each pencil line rubbed off dirty dark lead.
Onto paper from my eyes see just red.
Wasted life on this gold mine of splendour.
To loose it would make me feel so tender.

I hate. My love. Seen by many.
Those pictures inside not cured by any.
My creations that have had me crying.
My creations that leave me there dying.
©2006-2009 ~abbebe
:iconabbebe:

Author's Comments

This was for 's challenge #17 [link]

The theme: ''Write about an object that you value in a negative way''

So i wrote about mon sketchbook :)

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:iconpoetarryl:
~PoetArryl Jul 31, 2006, 10:33:05 AM
nice work =)

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If you do not change the direction in which you are going, you will end up where you are headed. ~Confucius
:iconabbebe:
~abbebe Jul 31, 2006, 10:40:34 AM
Thank You :)

--
[Lust]
If this is a sin then may I burn!
I can't help it my dear, for you I yearn!
Groan; scream; lips; movement; thrust; smooth; oh!
[He did tease her till she could not say no]
Love under sexual tension
:iconbcdepressionist:
Mood: Remorse ~BCdepressionist Aug 8, 2006, 8:13:44 AM
:) nice poem...though i look a beacon and thought it was bacon! =p *mmmm* b'e'acon

other then tht

80% get it =p lol! hehe

--
Trust in Him; And you'll be saved.
Proud to be a Jesus Freak
:iconb-x0:
~B-x0 Aug 9, 2006, 2:43:09 PM
Beautiful.<3

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- .Show.Me.The.Shadow.Where.True.Meaning.Lies.;So.Much.
[link]. -
:iconabbebe:
~abbebe Aug 18, 2006, 6:34:22 AM
Thank you :heart:

--
[Lust]
If this is a sin then may I burn!
I can't help it my dear, for you I yearn!
Groan; scream; lips; movement; thrust; smooth; oh!
[He did tease her till she could not say no]
Love under sexual tension
:iconabbebe:
~abbebe Aug 18, 2006, 6:35:25 AM
Lol! i hate bacon. Hehe. 8o% eh/ Good enough for me!

--
[Lust]
If this is a sin then may I burn!
I can't help it my dear, for you I yearn!
Groan; scream; lips; movement; thrust; smooth; oh!
[He did tease her till she could not say no]
Love under sexual tension
:iconbcdepressionist:
~BCdepressionist Aug 18, 2006, 1:30:57 PM
lol ! yay ! =p hmm bacon =p

--
Trust in Him; And you'll be saved.
Proud to be a Jesus Freak
:iconzahmin89:
~zahmin89 Aug 18, 2006, 10:44:09 PM
The rhyme is an interesting touch, but I have to say, free verse will always be king in my eyes. Normally rhyme makes a poem seem trite to me, but you've pulled it off well! A-! :-)
:iconabbebe:
~abbebe Aug 20, 2006, 3:56:07 AM
Hehe thank you very much! ANd interesting views on the rhyme in poems...

--
[Lust]
If this is a sin then may I burn!
I can't help it my dear, for you I yearn!
Groan; scream; lips; movement; thrust; smooth; oh!
[He did tease her till she could not say no]
Love under sexual tension
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