literature

Pleasure in pain

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We start as two
To end as one
Your breath so warm
Your words so strong

Her hands run slowly down his skin
They cradle; fondle as the elope in sin
Her every marked by his kisses
The pain so often cried out he dismisses
The pace quickens as they both scream
It becomes so like nothing else; a dream

It hurts so bad
Melancholy
Promise my love
Although lowly

Her cries become of fear and pain
He ignores it and continues in their shame
She belongs to him as always
Begins with pleasure but now she silently prays
She tried to make it work again
But the splendour felt before she cant mantain

Loved you once
You stole my love
My heart said yes
You were my dove

He doesnt understand whats wrong
Just moves inside her creating love's song
The way she does this makes him mad
Wants to take the back the feeling that they once had
Touches what belongs to him
They feel pleasure in pain with their love so dim

Just let me go
Im so confused
I just want you
I dont love you
Thought i'de try something different
Can you tell that the differnt stanza types are from different persons (1st and 3rd)?
And is it me or is there something wrong with the second line in the last stanza?

Anyway; enjoy :P
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i like this poem ^.^ and i only just noticed that i read through it without getting bored, i seem to be gettingused to poems longer than 6 lines! anyway, this poem, definate favourite